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Today was a very special day. Because my family went to the park and had a picnic together. We took No.xx bus to got there.
We flew the kite and played with our dog. We felt very tired and sleepy. So, we put the canvas on the grass and prepared for the picnic.
There were lot of food on the canvas, such as apples, strawberries, chips, bread, milk, orange juice and coca cola. My father used to have bread, but then he ate some bread. My mother ate some strawberries because she wanted to keep slim shape. I ate a packet of chips, because it was very crispy. Our dog ate a big apple anda bar of bread. Our dog was very lovely, wasn't it?
We had a good time today. We'll have a picnic again soon.