xiaohua's father bought her the（改為a） new bike the day before yesterday,which it（it刪去） made her very excited . so she rode it fast on the road . seeing a man get（改為getting） close to her .xiaohua couldn't stop it and as a result ,she knocked onto（改為into） the man. being very kind ,the man didn't scold her at all .instead,he told her how dangerously（改為dangerous） it was to ride a bike so fast . he asked her keep（keep前面加一個(gè)to） the lesson in mind . xiaohua felt regretful but（but改為and） ashamed . shepromised to keep the lesson in mind for ever ,

已幫你修正好,望滿意采納,goodnight!begin改為began最后一行的how改為what其余應(yīng)該沒問題了