in which food is taken to be eaten somewhere outdoors.我知道你想寫一個從句,但是寫的是錯的.in which是一個用于位置的從句.這句話可以改成picnic is a pleasure trip that we can eat some delicious foods in outdoor.這就是一個定語從句.we should first prepare necessary food
這句話改為We should prepare nessary foods first.食物應該用復數(shù).first不應該用在should后面.mest這個寫錯了喲,用復數(shù)meats.we can buy some fruit from the market,這句話可以在we前面加一個And,水果應該用復數(shù).my friend likes bread so i will buy some too
這句話重復了.but i will buy some breadafter seven o'clock.at this time the bread will be cheaper.這句話寫錯了,你想寫：在七點的時候買面包,因為它便宜.是不是?等你回了,我再給你改這句.把時間標明,是什么時候的七點.picnics are exciting把主謂都改成單數(shù).大概是這樣了.謝謝回答得很好~希望補充你看仔細，你回答了，我才能補充啊我們老獅說food和fruit都不要加s=。=關于那句but i will buy some bread after seven o'clock.at this time the bread will be cheaper.怎么改比較好啊~第二段你可以用第一，第二，第三之類的來分層嘛，這樣更好。因為你第二段太籠統(tǒng)了，看起不好。