Last week, I visitedLondonwithmyparents. Theweatherin London wassunny and it is good for having atravel. Itwas also a warmdaythat we allhave agood time there. I visitedmanyinterestingofLondon,such asBig Ben, London Eye , RIver Thames.I have agood time inLondon.
大致就這樣,精彩之處 Itwas also a warmdaythat we allhave agood time there. 這一句是強(qiáng)調(diào)句.還有用了一些短語.
望采納,謝謝.那個(gè)，我們作文需要分三段，可以再改一下下嗎？改完就采納哦~Last week, I visitedLondonwithmyparents.
Theweatherin London wassunny and it is good for having atravel. Itwas also a warmdaythat we allhave agood time there.
I visitedmanyinterestingofLondon,such asBig Ben, London Eye , RIver Thames.I have agood time inLondon.

對(duì)于50字的短文竟然要分三段，表示無語，，，呵呵，不分三段還會(huì)扣分呢。