幫我檢查一下這堆英文有沒有語法錯誤
I first read “DORABASE”（書名） in 2006.It was first cartoon about I have read.It was wonderful and I fell in love with it the first time I read it.We have some online communities on this cartoon and each of us likes it.
As to the love of "Dorabase"(我這句是想說：出于對dorabase的喜愛）,I often focus on the news about you and your works--"Dorabase".I konw you are very busy,but I hope you can find time to reply to me.Is it OK?If so,and that too thanks.Thank you.
這里有的單詞重復很多遍，而且我英語不好，比如XXX改成XXX。