Different people like different places. My favourite place is the Pearl River. Because the Pearl River is beautiful.
In the morning, the trees and the flowers beside the river are interesting. They dance like lovely girls in the wind. They attract many butterflies and bees. The bees and the butterflies always sing and dance in the flowers.It’s just a beautiful picture!
In the evening, many people go for a walk near the river after dinner. Some of them go there and run, some of them gocyclingnear the beautiful river. In summer evenings, the wind is so cool and soft. It’s really a good place to run away from the hot summer!
You can also see many beautiful ships and some little boats. There are many big trees near the riverbank. The water in the river is clear. There are many fish dancing in the water. What’syour favourite place?看不大懂唉，我才六年級，寫一些比較簡單的就可以了，15個句子左右就夠我用的了，請?jiān)诟纳埔幌拢?0分可不是白給的哦，可是有要求di天?。∫呀?jīng)很簡單了。怎么改啊，描述也要一些單詞的。已經(jīng)是找最簡單的語言了。唉！算了，再來一個吧，看看這個可不可以。 My favourite placeMy favourite is the sea.WheneverIfeel sad or happy.Iwould go to see the sea. BecauseIwould like to ask the sea to share myhappinessor sadness. WhenIfeel sad. The sun wasn’ t in the sky, and the sky was so gray, and my legs were very heavy. At that time,Iwould go to see the sea.The waves are talking and giving ideas for me.The sea would be a good listener and listen to me carefully.My sadness went away quickly.S o,Ithought the sea is wonderful. WhenIfeel happy.Iwould go to see the sea. But, only at night. Why? BecauseIcan see so many stars and a bright moon in the sky.T he waves are singing and dancing for me. At that time,Ithought the sea is the most beautiful. The sea is my best friend, my favourite place forever!你寫在公園里哪里的不行嗎，比如我最喜歡的地方是動物園了，動物園里怎么樣怎么樣的，你寫的這個地方我都不知道是哪里，我只是不知道寫這種作文的幾個要點(diǎn)，你也可以給我寫幾條重點(diǎn)，介紹他的什么也行。
要不你寫中文，我給你翻譯。
要點(diǎn)：
首先扣題，說明我最喜歡的地方是動物園。
介紹為什么喜歡。
最后總結(jié)