求大神英語改錯
Tom,I know there have trouble for you to communicate with others,and you is may often feel lonely.That’s why you are new here and people don’t know because about you.But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advices advice below.First,you should take a active part in the discussions and show your own an opinions about the matters.At the same time,never fail to listening to other listen people’s views.Second,you should learn/\ your classmates’ likes and about dislikes.Only in this way can you be able to get to know more different people will and show them that you are actually very friendly.Last but not least,I will always/\ ready to help you.We can take part in some activities together,when I be where can introduce you to others.As time going on,people will know you better and be willing to make With friends with you.Best regards.Peter