格式錯(cuò)了,名字錯(cuò)了.
Dear Debbie,
It's very kind of you to plan to adopt a homeless dog.Because animals are friends of our human .We shoud protect and love them.The problem with homeless animais is more and more serious now .We shoud try our best to solve this problem,and now you are doing it .Don'worry(不知道為什么要寫在這里,跟前后好像聯(lián)系不大).If you want to adopt a homeless animal（文章中的animal跟前面的dog覺(jué)得不搭）,you 'll have to be responsible for it.so you need to spend some time and energy to keep it.And you also need to(其中我覺(jué)得你情態(tài)助詞盡量少用must have to 這樣太肯定的語(yǔ)氣,不禮貌) know the knowledge about how to keep a pet well.Keeping a pet is hard,but it's happy （不用too了,你前面用了but）.I hope you could keep the dog well.
yours
Wang Dan