今年的大學(xué)英語四級作文online shopping我想估一下分,
nowadays,with the rapid of the internet,shopping online is becoming a fasion,especially among the young.
I believe that many factors contributed to the widespread of online shopping.Firstly,it is convenient for people to buy the goods and they don't need to go outside to seach the goods in shops one by one so that save their time.Secondly,the goods sells on the internet is cheaper than in shops,it can save their much money.However,shopping online can also be potentially dangerious.since the buyer and the seller do not need to deal with face-to-face,the quality of the goods can't be guaranteed,and the goods may be damaged during the delively.
From my piont of view ,shopping online is a trend and we should not be prohibited .But we should be careful while using it and the government should be take some measures make it perfect.
順便幫我看一下這個(gè)作文的語法什么的問題,我英語基礎(chǔ)不夠好