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You have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by tow students.Would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you,or would you rather choose your own roommate?Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
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Students seldom agree with each other in such a debatable issue that which is better,a roommate selected on one’s own or assigned by the university.While someone assigned by officials may bring one a lot of surprise and an opportunity to get in touch with people from different layers and cultural background which probably will broaden one’s horizon,as opponents may point out,I would prefer to share a dormitory with someone I pick on my own.
The roommate chosen on one’s own would be more acceptable.First impression plays a significant role in the relationship,and chosen one,as is often the case,perhaps has left an excellent first impression to another one.So they are more likely to get along well with each other.By contrast,if someone’s roommate is assigned by university,which is probably a disaster,there certainly will be offense or even a conflict because of a sense to defend called defense mechanism in psychology.
Moreover,everyone knows who will be the perfect person to be his/her roommate but university knows nothing about it.They,roommates,may share the same interest,share the same goal to fight for or even share the same time arrangement(schedule) which,nevertheless,the university gets nothing to know.However,on the contrary,if they have nothing in common or something in collision,what will happen?For instance,for the huge gap of habits a student named Ma Jiajue murdered his roommate with a knife during the night which has happened recently in Yunnan,china.What’s worse is that quantities of similar affairs are still happening all over the world every day,they indicate that it is of harms to let students share a room with a wrong person.So,to avoid this kind of tragedy I do hold a strong bias in choosing my roommate on my own.
Although some opponents would argue that university assigning one’s roommate will further the communication and better the harmony,on the other hand,I believe that there are other ways to promote these aspects as well.In other words,the potential benefits overweigh its harm.
In conclusion,I would rather choose a roommate by myself to share the dormitory with.