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I cried because I hate to part with my friends.But I couldn’t do anything,they were useless.What I could was wipe the tears away,pack my bags and go with my mom.When I came to Beijing,I lived with my cousins,therefore I went to a same school as my cousin did,which was an international school,though I didn’t know any English at that time.I thought although I couldn’t keep my study at Venezuela,but I still need work hard at new school and high achievement award,that was my goal,even though I didn’t know how to speak English.When I went to BCIS,I found to adopt a new environment was not that scary,everyone was friendly,and soon I had friends.After one year of staying at international school,I could start speak English.To start off of speak English was not easy,but once you start speak it,you will found that is not difficult.I get used to that school again,and I started join swimming team,basketball team and also participate in the drama play.Sometime I even sigh with emotion that if I didn’t come to that school,I won’t have lots of fun as I have now.If I didn’t come to this school,then I won’t speak English and play basketball as good as now.I appreciate that my mom brought me back.
From my own experience,it proves that Chinese idiom that the thing you think is bad will turn to a good result,but it needs to base on not give up and work hard.If I don’t work hard,then I will learn not so many thing,I will feel regret someday.So that wind closed a door,but didn’t blow another open.The key is about and depend on you.When only you are work hard,you can get chance and be the best.In that time no wind can blows you close.