幫我看看信有沒有錯（英文）
Dear daley
How's it going?I'm a Chinese girl who like you.My name si JiangYurong.I'm one year younger than you.I think you are an excellent water jumping player.And I thought you were a lovely boy when I had seen you.My classmates and I thought you had been good in Olypices in 2008.There are many people who like you very much,because we all think you are cute,clever and outstanding.The reporters in magazine have said,"thomas daley is a tanlent!"
I thought so.I have liked you since 2008.In my mind you are always the best,I will always support you.
I knew your birthday was coming when I write this letter
Happy birthday to you
大概意思為：我是一個喜歡你的中國女生 我的名字是XXX.我比你小一歲.我認為你是個很出色的跳水運動員.當我看到你時 我認為你是個很可愛的男孩
我的同學和我都認為你再2008的奧運會中有出色的表現(xiàn).這里有很多人非常喜歡你 我們都覺得你很可愛 聰明并且出色.記者在雜志中寫到你是個天才.
在我心中 你永遠是最棒的 我也會永遠支持你.
當我寫這封信的時候 你的生日快到了 祝你生日快樂
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