在線修改推薦信,求英語達(dá)人看過來!
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am very pleased to recommend a promising student,Ruihan Ma,for admission into your graduate studies program in Electrical Engineering.
I have known her since she enrolled in my course in “Digital Electronic Technique” in 2009.Because she was very conscientious do a good job in every aspect of this class; because she had extremely active performance in my class; because she was keen interested in discussing with me about Digital Electronic knowledge I introduced after class.All those above impressed me deeply.Furthermore,she has a perceptive mind and good comprehension ability to understand the application of electronic technologies in industry.Once I taught about multivibrator circuit structure in my class,many students can not understand how to use the different form of circuit in different situation.Yet Ms.ma comprehended the key points of this problem rapidly and help other students solve this problem.
More importantly,as Ruihan is also a student cadre in her class,she showed her initiative to help those who weren’t able to attend the class or can’t grasp the key of this class.I had witnessed her well-organized content about the class we had,from which,she not only recorded many details I mentioned in the class,but also summarized them under a set of knowledge frames.I believe her efforts to do such summaries both helped to consolidate her knowledge acquisition and contributed to the whole class in their preparation of the course paper.I could perceive from her coursework conclusion paper that Ruihan was able to draw reference from the previous knowledge and synthesize them into independent thinking of her own to explore some new topics about the technology application in some industries.
To conclude,Ruihan gave me a deep impression as an active and industrial student who has special learning aptitude in academic study.She is also a passionate leader and organizer of student activities who possesses continuous zest to contribute to her community.Based on her notable performance,I believe Ruihan will achieve higher academic goal she set for herself through advanced professional training in your program,and thus I strongly recommend her for admission.Your favorable consideration will be appreciated.Should further information be required,I am most willing to provide assistance.
Truly,
首先想在開頭說一下推薦人不僅給我教這門課,還是我的班主任.
其次,能否在內(nèi)容上適當(dāng)再充實一下.
求達(dá)人幫忙修改語法和用詞!