請幫我檢查英語書面表達里的錯誤,
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全班同學去了公園,根據(jù)下面的提示寫一則日記.天氣是晴朗的,活動包括上午爬山,釣魚,劃船,中午吃自帶食物,下午放風箏,打排球,做游戲.感受,很累,但很高興.
Today,our classmate went to the park.The weather was sunny.
In the morning we went to the hill.
The hill was not tall.And we although go fishing and boating.
In the afternoon,I felt hungry ,so I aet some food ,the food tasted so well.
I and my good friends were play the tennis,someone was play games.
Another were fly kit.
today was fantastic,I felt terrible but happy.
全班同學去了公園,根據(jù)下面的提示寫一則日記.天氣是晴朗的,活動包括上午爬山,釣魚,劃船,中午吃自帶食物,下午放風箏,打排球,做游戲.感受,很累,但很高興.
Today,our classmate went to the park.The weather was sunny.
In the morning we went to the hill.
The hill was not tall.And we although go fishing and boating.
In the afternoon,I felt hungry ,so I aet some food ,the food tasted so well.
I and my good friends were play the tennis,someone was play games.
Another were fly kit.
today was fantastic,I felt terrible but happy.
英語人氣:508 ℃時間:2020-06-06 08:35:19
優(yōu)質解答
一般不說The weather was sunny. 直接it 代替.It was sunny. 或 The weather was good.went to the hill體現(xiàn)不出爬,we climbed the hill.although表達轉折,這里應該是“也”,所以換 also過去的事態(tài)一致,把go fishing...
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