I'm tried to forget this day because I realy don't like growing up.
“I'm”的意思是“我是”,而你這里要用的應該是“我曾經(jīng)”,所以應該是“I have”或者是“I've”
[I've tried to forget this day because I really don't like growing up.]
The beforetime,I was always hoping my birthday,because of the birthday cake and the gifts.
不需要說“以前”,直接把句子變成過去試就可以了.另外beforetime是中國英語,以后絕對不可以用.
[I have always been hopeful for my birthday, because of the birthday cake and the gifts.]
There weren't any gifts or cakes in my birthday this year.
我覺得直接把句子繼續(xù)下去更好一點.翻譯是：可是今年并沒有禮物或蛋糕.
[This year however, there were neither gifts or cakes.]
I'm already 23 years old. I miss the past time so much.
句號改成逗號了.past time的time是多余的,另外沒什么問題.
[I'm already 23 years old, I miss the past so much.]
I was old a year old.（我想說我又老了一歲）So I did't think that the birthday is a happy thing.
我又大了一歲,過生日不再有趣了.
[I am another year older, birthdays are no longer exciting.]
That's why I didn't celebrate my birthday this year.
Anyway,Happy Birthday To Me!
每次只要有人用“anyway”,我就會覺得怪怪的,應該用“anyways”更好一點.可是在這里用“nevertheless”（意思是“盡管如此⋯⋯”）更加professional一點吧.
[Nevertheless, happy birthday to me.]
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And happy birthday to you!