我是個初中生,老師布置一篇英語作文,是有關"中國夢,我的夢",我試著寫了一篇,但總覺得不太好,請指教并改正
Everyone has a dream.For our motherland ,the largest dream is to make its effort to become stronger and more beautifulin the world.As a middle school student,I also have a dream.My dream is tobecome an astronaut in the future..When I was a little child,I became interestedin science and space.I read a lot of books about science and space.I admirethe astronauts for their courage and achievement and I dreamed of walking inspace one day.But I know my dream won’t come true unless I do my best .So Imake up my mind to learn as much as possible at school.As the saying goes ,“Whereis a will,there is a way”,I believe I will achieve my dream as long as Istick to my goal.I hope I will make a contribution to realizing China’s dream.