I thought I wasn't happy.But I think I'm very happy now.Because I hava a sweet and warm home.Although I don't have a father,I hava a mother who lovers me and a grandmother who loves me too.My families always do their best to me.They always stand on my side.Before,I only know that my misfortune.Finally,I khow what the truw happiness is.Happiness is to have a sweet and warm home.
我粗略看了一下,幫你改了一些明顯的錯誤.注意,although和but不能聯(lián)用.你應該還是一個初中生吧.
幫我看看這篇英語作文的錯誤,
幫我看看這篇英語作文的錯誤,
I thought I wasn’t happiness.But think I'm very happiness now.
Because I have a sweet warm home.Although I didn’t had father ,But I have a mother who loves me.And a grandmother who loves me ,too.
My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side.
I just know I unfortunate ago.But I finally know what true happiness is.Happiness is have a sweet warm home.
happiness
I thought I wasn’t happiness.But think I'm very happiness now.
Because I have a sweet warm home.Although I didn’t had father ,But I have a mother who loves me.And a grandmother who loves me ,too.
My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side.
I just know I unfortunate ago.But I finally know what true happiness is.Happiness is have a sweet warm home.
happiness
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