1.Where is the hospital?
可不可以改成：Can you tell me the way to the hospital?
2.My father bought a house for 100,000yuan.
很多都改成：My father spend 100,000 yuan (in) buying a house.這里要不要in?
可不可以改成：A house cost my father 100,000yuan.
3.Can you tell me your home address?
究竟是改成：Can you tell me where is your home?
還是改成：Can you tell me where your home is?
4.Jim didn't go home,Jack didn't go home,either.
改成：Jim and Jack didn't go home.可不可以?
5.He left the army two years ago.
改成：He graduate from the army wo years ago.
6.They won't go fishing,instead they will go swimming.
改成：They go swimming instead of (go)fishing.而且,要不要加go?
7.I can't decide what I should do next.
改成：I can't make up my mind to do what I should do next.
8.He didn't have breakfast and went to school in a hurry.
可不可以改成：He have nothing for breakfast and went to school in a hurry.
9.Nobody else sings as well as she in our school.
改成：Nobody sings better than she in our school.另外,要不要去掉else?
10.I should apologize for what I said to you.
是改成：I should say sorry to you.
還是改成：I should say sorry for what I said to you.
希望各位英文好的前輩幫幫忙.