I still remember how (nervously 改為 nervous) I was on my first day in the new school three (year 改為 years) (before 改為 ago).I found it (how去掉,或改成 very) difficult to follow my teacher in （加上the）first English class.She spoke (in 去掉) English throughout the class,(that改為 which) was totally different (as改為 from) the lessons I had taken before.In the morning class the next day,my English teacher came to me while (she改為 I) was reading the text aloud.After listening (加上 to) me for a while,she gave me a big smile and said she (likes 改為 liked) my voice very much.The smile shone (on 去掉) the whole day and for several （day 改為 days）.Thanks to the smile,I began to be confident.
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