Fish and chips and Chinese takeaway food is very popular in England .But they are less popular in America .In the USA ,they eat takeaway food,like children .But the most popular takeaway food is hamburger .It looks like bread has meat in it.Ham is a kind of pork,but the hamburger doesn't have any pork in it.It has beef in it .The beef is inside a kind of cake .Hamburgers are delicious.They are very popular in the USA,even in England and Australia.
1.and 之前不加逗號(hào)
2.takeaway好像中間沒(méi)有-
3.因?yàn)槟愫竺媸恰癇ut they are..." 那么 應(yīng)該是are吧
4.less popular
5.also 可以不要,也可以改成too
6.hamburger前不用定冠詞
7.It looks
8.Ham is a kind of pork,拼錯(cuò)了吧
9.doesn't have any pork 否定some要改成any
10.最后一行 Hamburgers are 吧