雅思小作文寫作求評(píng)個(gè)大概分
雅思小作文寫作求評(píng)個(gè)大概分
題目是劍6第2套關(guān)于英國(guó)各個(gè)交通方式變化的,規(guī)定時(shí)間做完,（19分鐘）147字,求個(gè)大概分,謝~~~
The table illustrates the statistics about changesin distance of varies of transportation had travelled from the period of timebetween 1985 and 2000 in England.
In general, the total distance per personper year climbed from 4740 to 6475 and almost all modes of travel experiencedan increase, except for walking, Bicycle and Local Bus, which witnessed anopposite trend in travelled distance.
Taxi, the least popular form of transportin 1985, almost tripled the figure and reached 42 miles per person per year. Besides,Car remained the top of the statistics by rose over 1500 miles and hit 4806miles at the beginning of 21st century.
By comparison, Bicycle dropped from 51 to41 and became the least popular transportation in 2000 when walking and localbus also went through a decrease.
Overall, all modes of travel changeddifferently from 1985 to 2000.
題目是劍6第2套關(guān)于英國(guó)各個(gè)交通方式變化的,規(guī)定時(shí)間做完,（19分鐘）147字,求個(gè)大概分,謝~~~
The table illustrates the statistics about changesin distance of varies of transportation had travelled from the period of timebetween 1985 and 2000 in England.
In general, the total distance per personper year climbed from 4740 to 6475 and almost all modes of travel experiencedan increase, except for walking, Bicycle and Local Bus, which witnessed anopposite trend in travelled distance.
Taxi, the least popular form of transportin 1985, almost tripled the figure and reached 42 miles per person per year. Besides,Car remained the top of the statistics by rose over 1500 miles and hit 4806miles at the beginning of 21st century.
By comparison, Bicycle dropped from 51 to41 and became the least popular transportation in 2000 when walking and localbus also went through a decrease.
Overall, all modes of travel changeddifferently from 1985 to 2000.
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首段點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫得過于啰嗦 例如 from the period of time between 1985 and 2000 in England并且出現(xiàn)了雙謂語的錯(cuò)誤 The table illustrates the statistics about .had travelled .二段點(diǎn)評(píng)：4740 to 6475 沒有單位 而...
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