請幫忙修改英語演講稿.My Dream of Life.
1、請找出這篇演講稿的語法錯誤并加以改正；
2、個人認為這篇演講稿（我自己寫的,我是個高二學生,但英語不太好）太中文化,希望可以得到指點,提升檔次.
3、假如你是評審,在聽了我的演講后,你會提出什么問題,我應該如何作答?
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演講稿正文如下：
My Dream of Life
Good morning everyone!It’s my great pleasure to speak here.I’m going to share my topic with you ——my dream of life.
The dreams are like flowers,gorgeous and clourful.The dreams are also like the sun spirited and vigorous.So if a man has a dream that he will be full of energy and go ahead boldly.
So small as I am,I have a great dream.I want to be a teacher,and then develope the course of education to enhance the knowledge and moral spirits of people,This is my dream,a lofty dream.
In my life,there is a teacher who has influenced me deeply .She has made me determined,positive and confident.Being my Chinese teacher,she had accompanyed me from Grade 3 to Grade 6 .Durine the days,She always encouraged me with her love every tome I met setbacks .When I made some progress she would also remind me to be modest.The day before I was leaving the primary school,she said to me “You are splendid so I believe that you will gain great success.Be sure and believe the kindness and morals do always exist.I hope you can do your best to make the world more beautiful.”My teacher’s words inspired me ,so from then on,my dream came into being.I am determined to be a teacher and develop the course of education to sow the seeds of hope.
Now I am a senior high school student ,each time I choked on the weighty schoolwork I would think of my dream,so I could cheer myself up right away.My dream encourage me to move on and inspire me never give wp.
In order to achieve my dream,I will study hard to perfect myself and face our life actively and optimistically.As an old saying goes “All things come to those who wait”.I do believe that in the near future,I will be an excellent teacher.I will achieve my dream!Yes,I can!
OK!That’s all.Thank you for listening.