請幫忙改下英語作文 口頭發(fā)言
請幫忙改下英語作文 口頭發(fā)言
The secret of success in life is for a man to be ready for his opportunity when it comes.
Success,maybe it is the mission of everyone'life.everybody wants to be successful,but few of them can succed.Why is that?What is the secret of success?
This sentence gives us an answer--be ready for the opportunity and catch it.
First,be ready for the opportunity means that you should know about your aim abviously.A man with no aim just like a ship with no destenation.You know about what you want to do,and go ahead.
Second,attitude is also a key to success.If you suppose that success only depands on the intellectual mind and do not work hard ai all,you are completely wrong.
Third,ability is important,too.But don't care whether you have it now.This can be established byyour work.We will gain a lot of experience as we grow up.
No one wasbornwith an great opportunity,but you can create it by yourself.Opportunitys only find those people who has been ready to face it.
And are you ready for success?
萬分感謝!
The secret of success in life is for a man to be ready for his opportunity when it comes.
Success,maybe it is the mission of everyone'life.everybody wants to be successful,but few of them can succed.Why is that?What is the secret of success?
This sentence gives us an answer--be ready for the opportunity and catch it.
First,be ready for the opportunity means that you should know about your aim abviously.A man with no aim just like a ship with no destenation.You know about what you want to do,and go ahead.
Second,attitude is also a key to success.If you suppose that success only depands on the intellectual mind and do not work hard ai all,you are completely wrong.
Third,ability is important,too.But don't care whether you have it now.This can be established byyour work.We will gain a lot of experience as we grow up.
No one wasbornwith an great opportunity,but you can create it by yourself.Opportunitys only find those people who has been ready to face it.
And are you ready for success?
萬分感謝!
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優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
從上到下修改:去掉for a man、hisopportunity改復數(shù)everyone'ssucced 拼錯了去 is thatFirst,be這里的be應(yīng)為being,first 應(yīng)為Firstly(或The first)abviously?應(yīng)為clearlyaimsYou should know同樣,secondlysuppose...
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