幫我改一下這篇英文演講稿
請改正其中的錯誤,比如用錯的時態(tài),句型,不恰當?shù)膯卧~,
要表達的主題是心靈的力量,我都拿不準這題目應該是The power from heart 還是the power in heart.總之就是改正所有的錯誤了,如果有要添要剪的地方就盡管該添的添,該減的減吧,
The power from heart
We may defeat a person by fist,but this can only be called physical strength,the real invincible power in our soul is the power from heart.
If a man get hurt in an accident,sooner or later he will get well again,but if he's feeling deeply hurted by another person,his heart being tear apart,it's diffcult to say if the man will cheer up again.
Why there are so many person suicide nowadays?Why they just cannot face the reatily,face the cruel part of life but just give up their value lives?The answer is they are lack of the power from heart,the kind of power have no business with wealth or his background,it's all depends on the person himself.
Exactly because the power from heart,fail person can stand up on his own feet again and keep on fighting with the hard situation,because the power from heart,a child without money,without family supporting ,without friends,even without a health body,still can find a way to be a successed man.
A person can have a good life without having anyting but the power from heart,that is ,since a man got the very power,he will get anything he want,there is nonting he can't do in this world.