Dear manager,
I am writing to tell you that（此前為開頭）one incident happened some days before . Last week I bought a TV set from your store . But when I returned home . I found that （把that 刪去）it has a number(把a(bǔ) number改為some) kinds of quality problems like sound and colors distorted . Therefore , I took it back to store to ask for change . When I talked to the shopkeeper , however , I was treated very badly . And I was told that he won’t （把won’t 改為couldn't）solve this problem .
I think , never will a company （把never will移至company 后,并把never will刪除）develop well with badly service . The service industry must improve their service quality !
Hope to get a solution !
Yours sincerely ,
Wang Ming能說說為什么嗎。。。- -把that 刪去，因?yàn)檫@句話不是定語從句；把a(bǔ) number改為some，因?yàn)闆]有a number kinds of這個(gè)用法；把won’t 改為couldn't，因?yàn)檫@篇文章為過去式；把never will移至company 后，并把never will刪除，因?yàn)檫@句話的語序不對。