改正改進(jìn)英語作文,主要是語法錯誤（詞組搭配,時態(tài)）
我國重新調(diào)整了假期制度,增加了中秋、端午等傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日
這樣的調(diào)整會產(chǎn)生哪些影響?
我的看法
Nowadays ,the holiday system has been reviced,which has aroused great concern.Many traditional festivals have been added into new system.This revision has a great effect on our life.
First of all,the ideas of western culture into china ,we have gradually forgotten our tradition culture of our country,the reason may be people like the new things.The revision make people aware of the need to protect their nation's culure.Moreover,many people preper to stay at home to have a rest during the short-time holiday.In addition,to see from goverment perspective ,more holiday can stimulate people's consumption,to adjust the country's economic.therefore,the revised holiday system has brought us many effects in our life.
as to me,New holiday system is wonderful!For one thing,making traditional festival would help me to learn about chinese festival and history.Foe another,I can have a good rest .In a word ,most of people will bennefit from the new festival system.
給評評!
新的節(jié)日制度中增加了傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，這是國家保護(hù)傳統(tǒng)文化的一項措施，我們會在新的節(jié)日制度中去了解傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日、文化，所以他是wonderful的一個原因。你回答的很認(rèn)真，很多我都采納了。