急修改2篇作文語法錯誤
幫幫我修改下文章的錯誤之處,一定不要有語法錯誤,盡量改的簡潔(語法簡單,常用的單詞).如果你愿意,可以做大的改動.★★★★★
我的名字叫…,今年19歲,現(xiàn)在在校就讀中.我的家在煙臺,家里有爸爸、媽媽、姐姐和我,我們的家庭很幸福.
我是一個很內(nèi)向的人,情緒很容易受到外界環(huán)境的影響.同時我也很樂于助人.我有很多的朋友,他們給我?guī)砹撕芏嗫鞓?
我的愛好很廣泛,例如：足球、籃球、睡覺、看書、上網(wǎng)、聽歌、歷史.
1,Introduce oneself ★
I an xxx,19 years old this year,while studing in at school now.My home is in Yantai,there is my family,father,mather,elder sister and i,our family is very happy.
I am a very introversive person,mood is very easy to be influenced
1,Introduce oneself
I am …,19 years old this year,while studying in at school now.My home is in Yantai,there is family,father,mother,elder sister and I,our family is very happy.
I am a very introversive person,mood is very easy to be influenced by external environment.I am very ready to help others too at the same time.I have many friends,they have brought much happiness to me
My hobby is very extensive,for example:Soccer,basketball,sleep,read,surf the Net,listen to song,history
2、My favorite sport★
我最喜歡的體育運動是跑步.在天氣很好的早晨跑步,你會感覺到這是多么的舒服、快樂.跑步不僅可以使你的身體保持健康,還可以解除煩惱.在跑步時,你會呼吸到新鮮的空氣,整個人會顯得很有精神.煩惱自然就沒了.我雖然不常去跑步,但是可以足以感受到跑步對人的好處.朋友們,讓我們共同為健康加油!
My favorite sport is running.Run when wearther is great in the morning,you will feel happy and relaxed.Running can make you keep healthy and have fun.When you running,you can feel very relaxing and activing.So you can have fun.Although I hardly ever running,but I can feel running is good at my health.Running,friends!Let us have a healthy baby!
第二篇要求和第一篇相同!根據(jù)你的理解和想象,在加20個單詞左右!
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