一場(chǎng)交通事故
【內(nèi)容提示】
根據(jù)下面的素材寫一篇短文,記敘一場(chǎng)交通事故的前前后后：
①一天晚上,Lee先生開(kāi)車帶著他的妻子下班回家.他的妻子是一家醫(yī)院的護(hù)士.快到午夜了,她十分困乏,很快就睡著了.Lee先生看看她,笑了.
②Lee先生駕車很有經(jīng)驗(yàn),也很謹(jǐn)慎.開(kāi)車走了一會(huì)兒,他注意到有一輛車在他后邊,車開(kāi)得很快,超過(guò)他的車.
③駕駛那輛車的人很慌張,沒(méi)有看見(jiàn)迎頭開(kāi)過(guò)來(lái)的卡車.為了避免撞車,他突然讓自己的車轉(zhuǎn)彎,車滑向路的一側(cè)撞到一棵大樹(shù)上.司機(jī)和乘客都受傷了.
④Lee先生急忙把車停在路旁,他的妻子也從車?yán)锍鰜?lái)幫助受傷的人.卡車司機(jī)也停下來(lái)幫忙.Lee先生驅(qū)車去給警察打電話.
⑤大約20分鐘后,一輛警察車和一輛救護(hù)車到了.人們把傷員抬到救護(hù)車上送往醫(yī)院.
⑥警察記錄事故的詳細(xì)情況,Lee先生和卡車司機(jī)把他們知道的情況都告訴了警察.警察感謝他們的幫助.Lee先生和妻子乘上自己的車?yán)^續(xù)趕路回家.
【作文示范】
A Traffic Accident
One night Mr Lee was driving his wife home from work.She was a nurse in a hospital.It was almost midnight and she was quite tired out.She soon fell asleep.Mr Lee looked at her and smiled.
Mr Lee was a careful and experienced driver.He knew it was safer to drive slowly on a dark night.After some time he noticed a car following him.It was travelling very fast.Suddenly it overtook① his car.
The driver of the car was in a hurry.He did not see the approaching lorry.To avoid hitting it,he suddenly tuned his car.It skidded② off the road and hit a big tree.The driver and his passenger were injured③ .They were badly cut by glass from the broken windscreen④.Mr Lee quickly stopped his car by the side of the road.His wife got out of the car to help the injured.The lorry driver also stopped to help.Mr Lee drove off to telephone the police .About twenty-five minutes later,a police car and an ambulance⑤ arrived.The injured were carried into the ambulance and taken to hospital.
The policemen took down details of the accident.Mr Lee and the lorry driver told them all they could remember.The policemen thanked them for their help.Mr and Mrs Lee got into their car and continued their journey home.
【詞語(yǔ)解釋】
① overtake +uv+'teik] v.追上；趕上；超過(guò)
②skid[skid] v.（汽車等）打滑；滑向一側(cè)
③injure['indN+] v.損害；傷害 the injured（事故中的）受傷者
④ windscreen['windskri:n] n.（汽車等的）擋風(fēng)玻璃
⑤ ambulance['$mbjul+ns] n.救護(hù)車
【寫法指要】
這篇文章按時(shí)間順序平鋪直敘地寫出了事故發(fā)生的前前后后,表達(dá)了故事中的人們不顧疲倦搶救傷員的互助友愛(ài)精神.
文章除了開(kāi)頭交待的時(shí)間外,后面只用了“After some time”和About twenty-five minutes later”兩處表達(dá)時(shí)間順序的詞語(yǔ),其他地方則是由動(dòng)作發(fā)生的先后來(lái)表達(dá)時(shí)間順序的,但讀后讓人感到文章將事件的前因后果表達(dá)得清清楚楚,沒(méi)有一點(diǎn)含糊.
注意學(xué)習(xí)其中表達(dá)緊張場(chǎng)面的副詞,如 suddenly,quickly等.