There are so many park and garden in it
這句park 和garden要用復(fù)數(shù)
And there are also many place of intrest in shanghai
里面place要用復(fù)數(shù)
For exanple,the bund,the Jinmso building,the Science and Technology Museam and the famous building --- Oriental Pearl TV Tower.
不用For exanple,改為such as 表示列舉 也是例如
My dream is be a writer
應(yīng)改為：My dream will be a writer.
你看對(duì)嗎?
睡能幫我改改這篇關(guān)于上海的英語(yǔ)短文啊```!急用``!
睡能幫我改改這篇關(guān)于上海的英語(yǔ)短文啊```!急用``!
My faverite citi is shanghai.
Shanghai is a big city .And it's east.Shanghai is a very beautiful city .There are so many park and garden in it.And there are also many place of intrest in shanghai.For exanple,the bund,the Jinmso building,the Science and Technology Museam and the famous building --- Oriental Pearl TV Tower.
And I know ,many many writer are from shanghai.Like Han han ,Rao xue man ...My dream is be a writer .So I like shanghai very much!And you?
My faverite citi is shanghai.
Shanghai is a big city .And it's east.Shanghai is a very beautiful city .There are so many park and garden in it.And there are also many place of intrest in shanghai.For exanple,the bund,the Jinmso building,the Science and Technology Museam and the famous building --- Oriental Pearl TV Tower.
And I know ,many many writer are from shanghai.Like Han han ,Rao xue man ...My dream is be a writer .So I like shanghai very much!And you?
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