第一段沒有問題.
第二段那句話有comma splice的問題,是一個斷句.
應(yīng)改為：their first song,"Mamma Mia",only took one week to break the sales record in Sweden.
(注意我把it去掉了,不然是錯誤的）
第三段有小錯誤.
你確定是fire fly還是fireflies?(不是owl city的fireflies)
還有最好用 they have released this album since 2001.
保持整段都用同樣的時態(tài).你前面用了現(xiàn)在時,后面卻用了過去式.最好不要這樣使用.如果在SAT上怎么寫,會被扣分的 :)
幫我看看這段對 a teens 的英文介紹有什么語法問題?
幫我看看這段對 a teens 的英文介紹有什么語法問題?
From Sweden's A-Teens (Abba Youth Group)is composed of Marie Serneholt (Mary,17 years old),Amit Paul (Ai-Ming,17 years old),Sara Lumholdt (Sarah,16 years old) and Dhani Lennevald (Dani,16).
The first song ,‘Mamma Mia’.It only took a week to break sales records in Sweden.
I like their song,‘fire fly’.It comes from their album ,《teen spirit》.They released this album in 2001.
From Sweden's A-Teens (Abba Youth Group)is composed of Marie Serneholt (Mary,17 years old),Amit Paul (Ai-Ming,17 years old),Sara Lumholdt (Sarah,16 years old) and Dhani Lennevald (Dani,16).
The first song ,‘Mamma Mia’.It only took a week to break sales records in Sweden.
I like their song,‘fire fly’.It comes from their album ,《teen spirit》.They released this album in 2001.
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