幫忙糾正這篇關(guān)于"小貓釣魚"故事的英語作文(初一版)
以下是我自己寫的(各方面還很不完善),使其成為完美的作文.
Mother Cat and Baby Cat are go fishing.Suddenly a bird coming.She feel very happy.The Baby Cat is going to catch the bird.But she can't catch the bird.Because she feel very sad.She feel happy again because there is a butterfly coming.And she is going to catch the butterfly.She can't catch the butterfly.She don't have a fish and she feel very sad.
以上是我寫的,"小貓釣魚"大家都知道吧,結(jié)尾的他沒釣到魚怎么用英語寫?
另外幫我指導(dǎo)下我的英語作文!