We are busy talking about and use (using) the Internet which (was) set up in the 1960s.At first,the Internet was only used by the governmental (government),but in (the) early 1970s,the universities,hospitals and banks were allowed to use it,too.
以上是改正后的這段話,
標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)了6處,其中包括標(biāo)點(diǎn)和后一個(gè)單詞間沒有空格、標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)多余
其他錯(cuò)誤就是括號里改正的四處
對于這樣的短文改錯(cuò),我可以推薦你一個(gè)好辦法,就是下載一個(gè)易改英語寫作輔助軟件,把短文貼進(jìn)去,就可以進(jìn)行改錯(cuò),很實(shí)用,可以試試.