I always showed my respect and love to the old.
改:I always show my respect...
I have also visited rest home to accompany
啥叫rest home啊?不懂.改成their home
In my opinion,it is our duty to care the old.
雖然care the old也沒啥錯,但是不常用.
改成take care of the old 或者更好一點:keep an eye on the old
The old have been working hard all their lives.
不用完成進行時的,完成時就可以了.
I think the old should be paid more attention as everybody now seems to be busy working but ignore their parents and grandparents.
不通.這樣整理一下句子順序哈:
I think the old should be paid more attention to though their children may be busy working and ignore them.
總結(jié):馬馬虎虎啦~用詞比較平庸,句式比較單一.
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請包括以下要點:
1.結(jié)合你的實際生活,談?wù)勗陉P(guān)愛老人方面,你平時是怎樣做的
2.就老年人應(yīng)該得到的待遇發(fā)表你的看法并闡明理由
可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)故事
I always showed my respect and love to the old.My grandparents don’t live with us,but we always do our best to help them.I have also visited rest home to accompany the old and chat with them.
In my opinion,it is our duty to care the old.The old have been working hard all their lives.And they gave lives to us and brought us up.I think the old should be paid more attention as everybody now seems to be busy working but ignore their parents and grandparents.The old not only need money and presents,they also need respect and love.
請包括以下要點:
1.結(jié)合你的實際生活,談?wù)勗陉P(guān)愛老人方面,你平時是怎樣做的
2.就老年人應(yīng)該得到的待遇發(fā)表你的看法并闡明理由
可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)故事
I always showed my respect and love to the old.My grandparents don’t live with us,but we always do our best to help them.I have also visited rest home to accompany the old and chat with them.
In my opinion,it is our duty to care the old.The old have been working hard all their lives.And they gave lives to us and brought us up.I think the old should be paid more attention as everybody now seems to be busy working but ignore their parents and grandparents.The old not only need money and presents,they also need respect and love.
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