Brilliant 2011 will be away from us,the 2012 is full of hopes and challenges that comes to us with smile.in the days of biding farewell to the old and ushering in the new,our school specially holds this art party,expressing our gladness with our songs and dance ,also our passion and enthusiasm and convey the vision for the new year.First,we have invited President Wang to delivery New Year's message,everyone applauds.Very grateful to President Wang's wonderful message of faith,then I announce that New Year's party is starting now!
Pursuit and dream make a beautiful flower in full bloom.Struggle and hard work write a song of flying up.Flowers like the sea,songs like the wave.In the new starting line,let us wish together :wish the developing Experimental Primary School and nursery institutions sweeping to new success and recasting a new glory.Now the party is over,once again I wish you all a Happy New Year、everything goes well and all your wishes will come true.非常非常感謝你的熱心幫助！有幾個疑問想請教一下：那個first是不是改成firstly好些，in the new starting line的介詞是in還是on合適呢,convey做狀語應(yīng)該改成conveying吧。期待你的回復(fù)?、倩旧蠜]有什么區(qū)別，不過要注意如果前面用了first 后面要用second；前面用firstly 后面要用secondly。因?yàn)樯衔臎]有second或secondly出現(xiàn)，所以用哪個都行的。②在起跑線上，固定用介詞in，這是固定用法；③convey與express同步，是要用ing形式。（不好意思，原先沒注意）謝謝你的回答，從你的回答中可以看出你是個非常嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)和認(rèn)真的人，值得向你學(xué)習(xí)！最佳答案就給你啦，嘿嘿！