That’s she so is shy to somebody!這句話有問題吧～應(yīng)該改為That’s she is so shy to somebody!不知是你打錯還是……?
其他的都還好啦,應(yīng)該可以評上9分～
祝你以后的作文能寫的更精彩～
英語作文幫我評評分和改正下`拜托!
英語作文幫我評評分和改正下`拜托!
My favourite animal
My favourite animal is dog,so I got a dog from my parents when at my 13 birthday.
My families all call it CiCi.It has two big eyes,a small nose and two sharp ears.CiCi wears a brown clothes and a big round cycle in it.It looks very lovely!It always walks around and around at home and sometimes makes us laugh.It likes eating bones better.It doesn’t like to eat chocolate or vegetables.But CiCi has a bad habit——That’s she so is shy to somebody!
I love my dog.I’ll take good care of it.
我不知道我這篇作文寫得怎樣,自由發(fā)揮的,如果滿分為10分,那我該得多少啊?哪里錯幫我改正下啊,
My favourite animal
My favourite animal is dog,so I got a dog from my parents when at my 13 birthday.
My families all call it CiCi.It has two big eyes,a small nose and two sharp ears.CiCi wears a brown clothes and a big round cycle in it.It looks very lovely!It always walks around and around at home and sometimes makes us laugh.It likes eating bones better.It doesn’t like to eat chocolate or vegetables.But CiCi has a bad habit——That’s she so is shy to somebody!
I love my dog.I’ll take good care of it.
我不知道我這篇作文寫得怎樣,自由發(fā)揮的,如果滿分為10分,那我該得多少啊?哪里錯幫我改正下啊,
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