請(qǐng)幫我檢查這篇英語(yǔ)作文的錯(cuò)誤.
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As cultures meet and communicate with each other.More and more western festival have known by Chinese.
Many young people start to celebrate western festival for example Cristmas、Father`s Day、Mother`s Day.They think western festival is full of relative`s love,it makes many people relax and happy.celebrating western festival is very intersting without much money.So they like celebrate western festival.
Of course,the great majority think they are Chinese,so they should have deep love for traditional festival for example The Spring Festival、Tomb-sbveeping Day、the Mid-autumn Festival.But I think traditional festival is tiresome to so much ceremony.Celebrating traditional festival need much money.
It`s free to celebrate traditional festival or western festival,I think.They have each their advantages,and I can be equally happy with either.
拜托了!后天要上黑板寫(xiě)的,麻煩大家?guī)臀铱纯?
1L、非常感謝你!
As cultures meet and communicate with each other.More and more western festival have known by Chinese.
Many young people start to celebrate western festival for example Cristmas、Father`s Day、Mother`s Day.They think western festival is full of relative`s love,it makes many people relax and happy.celebrating western festival is very intersting without much money.So they like celebrate western festival.
Of course,the great majority think they are Chinese,so they should have deep love for traditional festival for example The Spring Festival、Tomb-sbveeping Day、the Mid-autumn Festival.But I think traditional festival is tiresome to so much ceremony.Celebrating traditional festival need much money.
It`s free to celebrate traditional festival or western festival,I think.They have each their advantages,and I can be equally happy with either.
拜托了!后天要上黑板寫(xiě)的,麻煩大家?guī)臀铱纯?
1L、非常感謝你!
英語(yǔ)人氣:448 ℃時(shí)間:2019-11-09 02:57:37
優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
英語(yǔ)里應(yīng)該沒(méi)有頓號(hào)吧,western festival用western festivals更好一點(diǎn),第五行,relax是動(dòng)詞,改為relaxing,第六行l(wèi)ike celebrate改成like celebrating,我就能改這些了
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