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My name is law hau chung,Nickname is max.my birthday is November 20,Every day I go to school at 7 pm.my favorite color is green.but most do not like is the black.my favourite ice-cream is vanilla.Free time most like to play games,read books,Internet.My bedside is the Brothers Grimm*s Fairy Tales.Good at business,Putonghua,Computer.I'm afraid to swim.The most interesting thing that I forgot to pay for car.My room is the best computer items.Most do not like to eat pork.I travel the farthest place in Japan.I do not like housework is the best dishwasher.I fear the film is Insidious.If animals can do,I would choose to do bird,because the freedom to fly.I would like to visit the United States,because too much.i wish i could is Li Ka-shing,Because the money.