英語改錯高手請進!
Nancy,a native of Britain,who is studying Chinese in ( )
an university in shanghai.We are good friends.She studies（ ）
hard and always stay up late.Trying to improve her Chinese,( )
she always communicates with me with Chinese.( )
She likes to chat on the Internet when he is free,and she ( )
made a great many friends on the net.She likes Chinese music.( )
she often repeats after a tape which contains Chinese song.( )
All of us like writing poems.We sometimes exchange our ( ）
thoughts.In total,we have published 12 poems in our local ( )
magazine,but we bring in some money by writing them.( )