看看下面的文章有哪些錯誤,
看看下面的文章有哪些錯誤,
My college life
I have been stay at college about one and half a year.College life have quite difference from high school.The most difference is that college students are more independent and have a lot of freedom .There are no fixed seats or fixed classrooms .There are a lot of optional course .At college every day I attened four or six period of lessons .Sometime do experments,after class I often study in library ,Many magazines and books here are very helpful.But many students don’t know how to arrange their time ,they often spend their valuable time playing computer games.
In my spare time ,I like sports ,such as play tennis and ping-pong .I also like make friends .Now I have made many friends ,we eight girl students from difference parts of country share one dormitory .We like talk about our life at college and life in the future .We often have a lot of fun together .
I think the most important thing at college is that how arrange our voluble time and acquire as much knowledge as possible .I believe I can make greater progress in my study .
In a word ,I enjoy my college life very much.
My college life
I have been stay at college about one and half a year.College life have quite difference from high school.The most difference is that college students are more independent and have a lot of freedom .There are no fixed seats or fixed classrooms .There are a lot of optional course .At college every day I attened four or six period of lessons .Sometime do experments,after class I often study in library ,Many magazines and books here are very helpful.But many students don’t know how to arrange their time ,they often spend their valuable time playing computer games.
In my spare time ,I like sports ,such as play tennis and ping-pong .I also like make friends .Now I have made many friends ,we eight girl students from difference parts of country share one dormitory .We like talk about our life at college and life in the future .We often have a lot of fun together .
I think the most important thing at college is that how arrange our voluble time and acquire as much knowledge as possible .I believe I can make greater progress in my study .
In a word ,I enjoy my college life very much.
英語人氣:550 ℃時間:2020-09-04 18:44:15
優(yōu)質解答
這是我發(fā)現(xiàn)的問題,可能不全啊,第一句STAY改成STAYED,第二句建議全改,錯得太多,改為College life is quite different from high school life.第三句MOST改為BIGGEST.第七局SOMETIME改為SOMETIMES,且此句缺少主語,加主...
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