敘事用一般過去時,寫清去的地點,和誰去的,如何去的,做了些什么,你的感受等就ok了
如：
I went on a trip to Hainan with my family during this summer holiday.We went there by plane.As soon as we got off the plane,we went to the beach to see the beautiful sand and swam there.At noon we felt hungry so we had lunch at a seafood restaurant near the beach.We ate seafood like shrimps and craps,and drank some abalone soup.We also went to the flower markets and bought lots of flowers.Besides we climbed the mountain and took lots of beautful pictures.
We all didn't want to go home because the scenery was so beautiful,and there were so many other exciting things to try,but sadly it was time for us to go.
It was definitely an exciting trip.If I have a chance,I will go there again.
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