One-day trip in Shanghai
I went to Shanghai last week.It was so big.I saw many wonderful things.But after 3 days we had to be back.I hope i can visit the city again.
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One-day trip in Shanghai
last summer,my family went to Shanghai for our vacation--my father,mother and I.It was a really sweet memory--Sunny day,hospital people,Beautiful scenery and busy treets!we stayd there for a week.In this week,we visit Pudong,the Bund,Huangpu river ,Shanghai museum and so on.Also,we went shopping in the busy streets.what's more,we eat lots of famous shanghai foods:babao duck,haoyou beef,fried mantou,etc.what a unforgettable wacation for me!I would like to visit it again in my future day!
去年夏天,我們一家人去上海度假--我爸,我媽和我.這真是個幸福的會回憶呀--晴天,熱情好客的上海人,漂亮的景色和繁華的大街.我們待了一周.在這一周里,我們游玩了浦東、外灘、黃浦江、上海博物館,等等.我們還去購物、吃了很多東西：八寶鴨、耗油牛肉、油炸饅頭,等等.
真是個難忘的暑假啊、我想我將來還會再去一趟上海的!
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