大家都看過(guò)《武林外傳》吧,有一集講的是一位先生坐著時(shí)空大巴來(lái)到了同?？蜅?今天我也體驗(yàn)了一回,不過(guò)我去的不是同?？蜅?而是遠(yuǎn)古時(shí)代.
“七十七號(hào)旅游團(tuán)團(tuán)員注意了,本車已到達(dá)遠(yuǎn)古時(shí)代,請(qǐng)下車.”下了時(shí)空大巴,導(dǎo)游對(duì)我們說(shuō)：“你們?cè)谶@可以停留一天,明天的這個(gè)時(shí)候,時(shí)空大巴會(huì)準(zhǔn)時(shí)來(lái)接你們.好了,行動(dòng)吧!”我們和一群原始人類同住,他們說(shuō)的話等于“噪音”,我們這些來(lái)自二十一世紀(jì)的新新人類可聽不明白,還好導(dǎo)游帶來(lái)了雙向語(yǔ)言翻譯器,語(yǔ)言障礙就不存在了.“我們一起吃飯吧!”野人首領(lǐng)說(shuō).這時(shí)他們拿上來(lái)了一只血淋淋的生鹿.對(duì)啊,在這沒(méi)有火的時(shí)代只能吃生肉啊!這可怎能讓我們的“只認(rèn)熟不認(rèn)生”的胃買賬呀!還好,還好,我找來(lái)了一些木頭,拿出早已準(zhǔn)備好的打火機(jī).哈哈,點(diǎn)著了!我們吃了一頓香噴噴的烤全鹿,不由得犯了食困.野人朋友們主動(dòng)幫我們看火種,還可以用來(lái)幫我們驅(qū)趕野獸.第二天,時(shí)空大巴準(zhǔn)時(shí)來(lái)接我們了.我們戀戀不舍地離開了遠(yuǎn)古時(shí)代.
回到了家,我打開了電視機(jī).一條新聞驚暴而出,那就是“遠(yuǎn)古時(shí)代驚現(xiàn)打火器!誰(shuí)會(huì)想到那是我的打火機(jī)之壯舉啊!
指導(dǎo)教師：海鯤
點(diǎn)評(píng)：一個(gè)普通的文題,可經(jīng)過(guò)小作者巧妙的構(gòu)思,豐富的想象,卻別有一番滋味.時(shí)尚的流行元素、環(huán)環(huán)相扣的情節(jié)、扎實(shí)的文字功底在本文中體現(xiàn)的淋漓盡致.結(jié)尾處別出心裁,讓人忍俊不禁的同時(shí)更給人無(wú)限的遐想.
總而言之,該文插上了想象的翅膀,另人眼前一亮,成為了一道亮麗的風(fēng)景.
Everybody read the TKS ",so the episode is a gentleman sitting space-time bus came with blessing inn.Today I also experience once,but I go not the same blessing inn,but ancient times.
"Seventy-seven member,tour,take this vehicle has arrived in ancient times,please get off the bus." Under the space-time bus,tour guide says to us,"you can stay in this day,this time tomorrow,space shuttle bus will come on time receive you.Well,so go!" We and a group of primitive people dwell,they said equals "noise",we these from the 21st century new new mankind can't understand,but also good Courier brought FanYiQi both languages,the language barrier would not exist."We have dinner together!" Savage chief said.Then they took up a bloody born deer.Yeah,in this era of no fire only eat raw meat!This can be the "how can we only know ripe not RenSheng" stomach buy!Okay,okay,I found some wood,take out already prepared lighter.Haha,point!We ate a delicious roast whole deer,I made food trapped.Savage friends volunteered to help us see fire,can also be used to help us driven wild animals.The next day,the time and space shuttle on time to meet us.We be reluctant to leave the ancient times.
Back home,I turn on a television.A news frightened suddenly and violently and go out,that is "ancient times appeared dozen firearms!" Ha ha,who would have thought that is my lighter the feat!
Teacher:the sea "kun"
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