my hobbies are reading news and doing sports,for example,playing basketball.
最好把短的內(nèi)容放在句子前面一點 這樣看起來更清晰 還有就是你有不止一個hobby 所以應(yīng)該用are~
另外一個小問題就是 used to這個短語用的太頻繁了點.
還有就是最后一句do you share my interests 因為我不清楚你到底是想表達什么意思嘛 所以也不好改 請問你是打算說“你有和我相同的興趣嗎?”還是“你愿意和我分享我的愛好嗎?”如果是前一種 那么這句沒問題 如果是后一種 那么就像二樓說的那樣應(yīng)該改為will you share my interests
初中英語短文My hobby
初中英語短文My hobby
Hello!My name is Xiaoming.I’m a basketball fan.But I used to be a movie fan.My interests are changing all the time.I used to enjoy playing computer game,and I wasn’t interested in sports at all.But now,my hobby is doing sports like basketball and reading news.And I never miss any important basketball games.I used to know little about paintings.But now I like collecting them.
Do you share my interests?
問一下這里語法哪里錯了?
Hello!My name is Xiaoming.I’m a basketball fan.But I used to be a movie fan.My interests are changing all the time.I used to enjoy playing computer game,and I wasn’t interested in sports at all.But now,my hobby is doing sports like basketball and reading news.And I never miss any important basketball games.I used to know little about paintings.But now I like collecting them.
Do you share my interests?
問一下這里語法哪里錯了?
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