happies改為happiness.
on a hand改為on the one hand
in a world 改為in a word
其他沒什么錯(cuò)誤,注意細(xì)節(jié).這篇文章寫得還不錯(cuò),有些用法挺不簡(jiǎn)單的,你是初中還是高中?
我寫的英語作文,
我寫的英語作文,
nowdays,more and more people are keeping pets.Keeping a pet has many advantages.For example,a pet can bring some happies to us,it can become our good friend ,making our life more colorful,however,just as every coin has two sides,keeping a pet also has its disadvantages.on a hand,it makes our room dirty ,mess,also can make some noise .on the other hand ,it brings extra cost in our life.in a world,keeping a pet has both advantages and disadvantages.as far as I am concerned,an old man can keep a pet,because the old man has time to look after the pet,the small animals will be good friends.
nowdays,more and more people are keeping pets.Keeping a pet has many advantages.For example,a pet can bring some happies to us,it can become our good friend ,making our life more colorful,however,just as every coin has two sides,keeping a pet also has its disadvantages.on a hand,it makes our room dirty ,mess,also can make some noise .on the other hand ,it brings extra cost in our life.in a world,keeping a pet has both advantages and disadvantages.as far as I am concerned,an old man can keep a pet,because the old man has time to look after the pet,the small animals will be good friends.
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