也很遺憾告訴你有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤.
首先,這篇文章是敘述過(guò)去的事情,除了對(duì)話里的內(nèi)容,其他均要用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)的.所以修改如下：
Four best friends met at the hospital since（用when比較合適點(diǎn)） their wives were giving births to their babies.The nurse comes（came） up to the first man and says（said）,"Congratulations,you got twins." The man said "How strange,（用感嘆號(hào)啦~） I'm the manager of Minnesota Twins." After a while the nurse comes（came） up to the second man and says（said）,"Congratulations,you got triplets." Man was like "Hmmm,strange I worked as a director for the "3 musketeers." Finally,the nurse comes(came) up to the third man and says (said)
"Congratulations,you got twins x2." Man is(was) happy and says(said),"Ironic,I work for the hotel "4 Seasons." All three of them are(were) happy until they see(saw) their last buddy jumping all over the place,cursing God and banging his head on the wall.They asked him what's wrong (what was wrong/ what had happened)and he answered,"What's wrong?I work for 7up"!