以下是我對你的這篇文章的一點個人意見;)
1.題目
按你的字面意思是想說網(wǎng)絡作為一個新的新聞媒介正在發(fā)展中,但你的表達不符合英語的表達習慣,我建議改成:Internet---the developing news media.
2.你的文章里面多次用到了read news,我認為不是很好,你看是不是可以用get informations來代替呢?
3.第一段里面,”舊的方法”應該是”the old way”,classic的意思是”經(jīng)典”,用在這里不合適.另外,listening前面的or應改為and,這里是陳述,不是疑問.
4.第二段開頭太亂,可以改成: 163,sohu and sina are are some of the popular comprehensive websites now in China, on which there are ```` 就可以了.
5.第三段倒數(shù)第二句應該把里面的this```改為in this way,you can save``````and will waste no paper.
enviroment應該改為enviromental.
6.第四段第一句的alike可以刪去, absorb是”吸收”的意思,”吸引” 可以用interest.
7.最后一段,我想這樣表達可能更好:I know everyone of us may use our spare time to get informations on the internet to enrich our views and I hope my speech will be a piece of useful advise for all of you!
另外還有一些拼寫錯誤我就不一一指出了,希望我的意見能對你有所幫助:)
幫我看看這篇文章有沒有語法錯誤
幫我看看這篇文章有沒有語法錯誤
如題The news media is developing on the internet
The classic ways to read news are reading newspapers, magzines or listening to the radio.But in recent years, with the popularize of the internet, many people begin to use the computer to do this.
Some of the famous Chinese comprehensive websites now are 163,SOHU and SINA,on which there are a lot of newlyu reported news about entertainment,society,legendary figure,international situation and so on.
There are many advantages to read news on the internet.For example, the possibilities to read newspapers in different languages, to know the important events all over the world immediately and to see the different opinions of people of all walks of life about one piece of news by seeing investigates on the internet.And the most important thing is that this can save your money from buying newspapers or magzines and this will not waste any paper. This can be also called 'An action of enviroment protection'.
But every thing has its advantages and disadvantages alike.Some unhelthy websites sometimes reports some fictitious news to absorb the readers and it will lead the readers to a wrong way. So when the readers are choosing the news on the internet they should be more careful.
My classmates, you may use your spare time to read the news on the internet to enrich your view, this is a very useful advise to all of you.
如題The news media is developing on the internet
The classic ways to read news are reading newspapers, magzines or listening to the radio.But in recent years, with the popularize of the internet, many people begin to use the computer to do this.
Some of the famous Chinese comprehensive websites now are 163,SOHU and SINA,on which there are a lot of newlyu reported news about entertainment,society,legendary figure,international situation and so on.
There are many advantages to read news on the internet.For example, the possibilities to read newspapers in different languages, to know the important events all over the world immediately and to see the different opinions of people of all walks of life about one piece of news by seeing investigates on the internet.And the most important thing is that this can save your money from buying newspapers or magzines and this will not waste any paper. This can be also called 'An action of enviroment protection'.
But every thing has its advantages and disadvantages alike.Some unhelthy websites sometimes reports some fictitious news to absorb the readers and it will lead the readers to a wrong way. So when the readers are choosing the news on the internet they should be more careful.
My classmates, you may use your spare time to read the news on the internet to enrich your view, this is a very useful advise to all of you.
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