Music is a wonderful thing.I like music because it can make me happy,excited,touched,and even sad sometimes.
Listening to lively music cheers me up when I am sad.
I enjoy listening to music more and more.Pop music is my favorie genre of music; sometimes it makes me wanting to dance.
Do you also enjoy listening to music?If you do,let's become friends!
語法上基本沒有問題,只是有些地方比較拗口.有些地方有重復(fù)羅嗦的嫌疑,我改了一下.第一句話少了一個 a,可能是筆誤.第二句我改成了因果句式,更連貫一些.第三句基本沒有問題,我把助動詞 can 去掉,更主動一點.第四句其實表達(dá)了兩個意思,所以要分成兩句.Will 是多余的.既然是一般時態(tài),將來時就免了吧.最后一句里的 also enjoy it 是多余的因為上一句里已經(jīng)有了 do you also enjoy.
希望能幫到你忙.
PS：三樓的翻譯一看就是用軟件翻的,還裝.
英語高手來,幫我看看這篇作文!
英語高手來,幫我看看這篇作文!
我英語不是很好,大家?guī)臀铱纯催@篇作文有沒有什么地方不對,幫我指出改正,
Music is wonderful thing,it can makes us hapyy,excited and touched,even sad,so I like it very much.
Listening to lively music can cheer me up when I was sad.
I enjoy listening to music more and more,and pop music is my favorite music,sometimes it will makes me want to dance.
Do you also enjoy listening to music?If you also enjoy it,let's become friends!
那個一樓的怎么那么不禮貌?。∥页姓J(rèn)我英語很爛，寫得不好，那你也不能說不倫不類吧？而且一樓的除了告訴我will,can后加動詞原形之外，都沒有幫我糾正其他錯誤了，一樓的那位也不是很厲害嘛~
我英語不是很好,大家?guī)臀铱纯催@篇作文有沒有什么地方不對,幫我指出改正,
Music is wonderful thing,it can makes us hapyy,excited and touched,even sad,so I like it very much.
Listening to lively music can cheer me up when I was sad.
I enjoy listening to music more and more,and pop music is my favorite music,sometimes it will makes me want to dance.
Do you also enjoy listening to music?If you also enjoy it,let's become friends!
那個一樓的怎么那么不禮貌?。∥页姓J(rèn)我英語很爛，寫得不好，那你也不能說不倫不類吧？而且一樓的除了告訴我will,can后加動詞原形之外，都沒有幫我糾正其他錯誤了，一樓的那位也不是很厲害嘛~
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