In the eyes of the majority of Chinese people, ice cream eating children and women, a large man holding an ice cream is very inappropriate.
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For most of Chinese, icecream is for femals and kids, a man with a icecream in hand is not in good taste. 后面兩個短句中間沒有連接詞,不符合.
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In the eyes of the overwhelming majority of Chinese people,icecream is suitable for children and females,then/but a man with a icecream is inappropriate.