Today is my birthday. I feel very happy.I invite my friend to join my birthday party.I buy some food to treat my friend.When they arrive,they buy some gifts.Thanks for giving me so much fun.We eat some food,some juice.All the friends who join the party praise me. Then we are dancing ,singing,playing.When the party ends,they don't want to leave my home.But we can hold the party again.
I am happy more than I can say.I love this party. Ilove my friend.速度急急急急急急急急急急急急急急Thanks for my mother my father giving me my life.I will study hard to let them feel happy.加到后面就行了。你也可以把文章改成過去式。