錯(cuò)誤太多了哦
actually換成recently,后面的recently刪掉
there后面加have been
happen on換成happen to
下一句中的a lot of 冗余去掉
worked very hard on it把那個(gè)it刪掉
a good result換成good results
This makes me not only sad but also despair.
改成This makes very disappointed even a little bit despair
touching換成touched,hear換成heard
I try to believe
改成I'd like to believe
hope后面改成that day could come sooner
最后一句改成same here,I wish everything‘s going on fine with you tooRecently, there have been a lot of terrible things happen to me. Things which I worked very hard on but did not get good results. This makes very disappointed even a little bit despair. That's why I'm so touched when I heard your story. I'd like to believe everything will be fine and I truly hope that day could come sooner. Same here，I wish everything's going on fine with you too.差不多了